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Admission essay excerpt
Through my involvement with outreach programs and health seminars, I learned about the importance of health education and medical care to smaller communities, which have limited access to medical service. I see the need of the people to have better medical care in these areas to address issues about nutrition, hygiene, and sanitation and prevent the spread of infectious diseases and casualties due to lack of information and available service. I find great fulfillment in being a health educator and also being a medical lab technologist where I assist in testing and analyzing collected specimen for research and diagnosis. But because of my fervent interest in helping people in my community and belief in my higher purpose in life, I decided to take a medical degree so I can be a medical specialist and be able to save more lives through proper medical care.
Sample outline
I. Why I want to go to med school
A. Involvement with outreach programs and health seminars
i. seeing the need for extensive health education and proper medical care
ii. preventing casualties and spread of diseases through available service
B. Getting a medical degree
i. believing in higher purpose in life
ii. saving more lives
iii. taking the next step from my experience as health educator and medical lab technologist
iv. helping the community
v. becoming a medical specialist
II. Relative experience, education, and interest
A. Educational background
i. Master in Zoology at ______
ii. Parasitology Bachelor of Science (B.Sc, Hons)Medical Laboratory Technology at _____
iii. explaining my interest in this field
B. Professional experience
i. lecturer
ii. medical lab technologist
C. Seminars and outreach activities
i. volunteer work
ii. membership to different organizations
iii. training
III. Review of relevant skills
A. Research
i. published and unpublished works
B. Lab experience
C. Medical expertise
D. Lecturer/health educator experience
IV. Your motivations
A. Goals
i. to become a doctor and help save lives
ii. to help provide better medical care and service
iii. to specialize in a particular field of medical expertise
B. Why I’m fit for the program
i. seeing the need of people for medical service
ii. having relevant medical experience and educational background
iii. helping my community
iv. fulfilling a higher purpose in life
















